a story
uh yea I spit on the beat gotta flow and it's ruthless nigga you built like a dragon you toothless I got some hittas you know they are ruthless i ride wit killers we don't play we ain't fooling yo girl she be thick she walk pass me I'm drooling yea I'm changing the flow and it's finna go stupid nigga you fake u ain't really shootin you keep trying to play you a clown you a joke you sippin on water I hope you don't choke im running it up as you know I'm the goat remember day's in the street i had no where to go they cut off our water but didn't stop my flow member day's in the house where you sleep on the floo times it get hard but they think im a joke I was drinking some water in need of a coke member I didn't have money back then I was broke but now I got cash people come and they go my moma was crazy but she didn't raise a joke if you jump in that water i bet you gon float don't need to diss i dont really need to gloat friends flipped the script they just mad cause they broke i remember my teacher she called me a joke keeping our sticks when we walk to the store she said i couldn't make it well look there we go im making my money got banzs on the floo count it right up and we changing the score laughing at people who called me a joke buire your feelings heart black like a cloak took his life before his mouth even spoke dollar sings made his girl go and choke bodies on bodies put them in the scope ending this rap so I give you this flow (uh yea i spit on the beat gotta flow and it's ruthless nigga you build like the dragon you toothless i got some hittas you know they are ruthless i ride wit killers we don't play we ain't fooling)
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐
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Yo @jayvongreen! Waddup - let's take a look at 'a story'! We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. Good choice of beat! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
it's not my best it's just a lil sum I'm 13
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
so I messed up towards the end so I just winged it
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