Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @ls24! Thanks for sharing 'FCK Reality (17:39:12)' with us! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Try practising effects more to see how they work best. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Louise Snow

3 years ago

This is my first try at rapping…

Louise Snow

3 years ago

Tell me what you wanna be Tell me where you wanna go Tell me what you wanna see Tell me and I’ll make show Tell me what you wanna be Tell me where you wanna go Tell me what you wanna see Tell me and I’ll make show Sick of all the pain, I am sick of all the hurt and the burn Ima runaway runaway and never return. Never COMIN’ back Leanin’ on clouds up in heaven with my rap feelin’ free at last Floatin’ through the present I ain’t focused on the past, mind on the money I am focused on the cash. Just broken beyond repair Feels like no one’s even there God ain’t even care It ain’t even fair. Tell me what you wanna be Tell me where you wanna go Tell me what you wanna see Tell me and I’ll make show x2 All this bullshit surround got me down Wish I could just run free fun free, to the fuckin’ sound Turn the music loud Now I’m sprintin’ through the clouds. Clear your mind free Your doubts we gon scream, we gon shout till we blow them speakers out. Close my eyes til I don’t exist Floatin’ through the black, Peace and bliss Peacefulness, escape the place where evil is, Escape it all cuz I can’t face it all. Tell me what you wanna be Tell me where you wanna go Tell me what you wanna see Tell me and I’ll make show Tell me what you wanna see Tell me and I’ll make show