Broken💔

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Broken💔

tell me that you Love me girl you were joking never knew you'd leave me yeah I didn't notice got me high I'm drinking burning liquor now I'm standing with my mixed emotions Should have told me this wasn't true Should have told me that isn't real never let you in if I'd known all I want is to be with you but think twice I think i am wrong Now I'm lost I think I need help Now my life is full of your mess Now I'm trying just to confess You got it wrong you knew it all along I was trying to be strong you knew I don't belong never let you go if I'd known now im moaning all alone now staying all alone this is all what you know I'm so screwed up I'm so fucked up you didn't turn up when I was down was told that you were with Larry but I thought that they were lying this is all wat you been hiding and I thought that you've been caring no wait up wait up girl you've been moving too fast you know I loved you why are you tryna leave me now this ain't too fair neither is it too dark but I know very soon I'm gon' find someone else could it be you bullshit i don't know could it be you oh no I don't know 😣 would this still stay oh no we gon see we gon see *3 FROM THE TOP

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5 years ago

tell me that you Love me girl you were joking never knew you'd leave me yeah I didn't notice got me high I'm drinking burning liquor now I'm standing with my mixed emotions Should have told me this wasn't true Should have told me that isn't real never let you in if I'd known all I want is to be with you but think twice I think i am wrong Now I'm lost I think I need help Now my life is full of your mess Now I'm trying just to confess You got it wrong you knew it all along I was trying to be strong you knew I don't belong never let you go if I'd known now im moaning all alone now staying all alone this is all what you know I'm so screwed up I'm so fucked up you didn't turn up when I was down was told that you were with Larry but I thought that they were lying this is all wat you been hiding and I thought that you've been caring no wait up wait up girl you've been moving too fast you know I loved you why are you tryna leave me now this ain't too fair neither is it too dark but I know very soon I'm gon' find someone else could it be you bullshit i don't know could it be you oh no I don't know 😣 would this still stay oh no we gon see we gon see *3 FROM THE TOP

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5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉

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5 years ago

Hi @tex_brown! Welcome to our feedback of 'Broken💔'! Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? Try practising effects more to see how they work best. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! The beat is fire, nice choice. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

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5 years ago

solid track dopeee. can you please check this #Runningamee Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

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4 months ago

BOMB! 🧨 CAKE 🍰 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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