Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @nickhyatt! Welcome to our feedback of 'freestyle preview '! The lyrics are fire, nicely done! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. This is too short, please share a longer track for us to review! Good choice of beat! Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Nick Hyatt

3 years ago

If u ask me how my life is goin I could lie or tell the truth All my problems overflowing Man this life really ain't the mood I used to appreciate the fuck outa food And along with my will to live I dont wanna keep on moving on Everytime you cross my mind I try to stay strong Have you ever felt to much fucking pain You wanna go dont wanna stay Put a bullet to the brain Life is sum I can no longer sustain Why did I fuck all that I love up I'm giving out my trust just to get this lust. Sometimes I think for hours out my day Thinking of the reason why I'm stuck up in this place I really think the hole for my grave is made Cuz I can't think of single word to say To back up all this pain inside of me. Nothing new is really going on I'm kinda living in the past Dont think that mean I'm getting strong Cuz I might still let my 40 blast Yeah I never had my dad, all thru school i did real bad step dad always beat me for the grades that I would have Had no friends so I was sad I dropped out i was no grad I overdosed when I relapsed The step dads name yeah it was chad Hes one big reason I went to live with my dad Then I got hooked on drugs The ones that bad I'd get outa jail and then go back My charges I stacked and racked Now I'm looking at some prison time So long I wont come back. So why not act out and lash File my rage by haunted past Pools of my own blood and distant screams of agony race thru my mind so fast I was at my best a couple months ago Then I quickly fell on my face flat. Man I couldn't even describe my pain in a song Do you feel like all you do is wrong? Have you ever not known how to be strong? Did you ever cut so deep you had to call police? I dont think I'm better I just dont think anyone has pain like me Ima drown my pain with 100 proof You said we where forever So I stayed 100 to you Turns out all that wasnt true I hate I wasted time on you I gave everything I had to a new relationship just to prove No matter what the fuck you pit in to someone All that work your gonna loose