Hi @davidregan!
Welcome to our feedback of 'ravin dave'!
The beat is fire, nice choice. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track.
Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track!
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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Hi @davidregan! Welcome to our feedback of 'ravin dave'! The beat is fire, nice choice. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
dope Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Impression: 8/10 Impression: Great 🎉
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Dope 🔥
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥