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rise up

I'm on another level, They gotta play catch up, I'm never gonna settle, Right now I got next up, I got my eyes on the prize, Meteoric rise, Record breaking highs, Limit is the skies, Word to the wise, Before you even try, This is just a taste, I'm about to shine, Light so bright, That it might leave you blind, Aspiration so great, That it can't be denied, So lend me your ears, And check out my rhyme, You've been blessed by the best, Thanks for your time

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5 years ago

I'm on another level, They gotta play catch up, I'm never gonna settle, Right now I got next up, I got my eyes on the prize, Meteoric rise, Record breaking highs, Limit is the skies, Word to the wise, Before you even try, This is just a taste, I'm about to shine, Light so bright, That it might leave you blind, Aspiration so great, That it can't be denied, So lend me your ears, And check out my rhyme, You've been blessed by the best, Thanks for your time

5 years ago

Hi @xxxalfiexxx! Welcome to our feedback of 'rise up '! Your vocals are the perfect volume, nicely done. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. We think your improvising could do with some work, just a little practice and you're there! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

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