my brother
Lil_khalanboy you know im really slidin for my brother really ridin for my brother and if you fuck with my brother bitch i really kill yo fucking bum ass bitch and i really got yo girl you cant get mad cause she on my dick nigga and if you play with my dead homies bitch i really hunt yo stupid ass yea and bitch we smoking on that gas
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Hi @lil_khalan! Welcome to our feedback of 'my brother'! Good choice of beat! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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