need a second verse

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no lights in my sky nothin but darkness everyday day a body fallin that bag be calling young niggaz with dreams takin it all in so caught up in the money the cause then wonder fallin right hand using the same one to say its all him shit make me nause so i trust no man i move witb caustion never exspose my hand i keep it all in i got death on my mind becuase i know its comin so i keep the pool on cause i dont pla. on runnin im tryna get to the bag but it keep on runnin from me

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DameDrill5

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5 years ago

Slimey Joe

4 years ago

🇺🇲🔥🙏💿💚🐍💸 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

LIL4ORTY_DRIP

4 years ago

eat mane ,fire Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

Dajudge 🎭

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hey @damedrill5pl! Thanks for sharing 'need a second verse' with us! Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, well done. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. The beat is fire, good choice. Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Dr. Papa Fritzl Plush

5 years ago

dope so far brother 🔥🔥🔥 Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Brian Engram

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

The Mexican National Bird’

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Cato Kirin Casper

11 days ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥