Lil jay

3 years ago

fire

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @rango.6435! Welcome to our feedback of 'first song'! The beat is fire, nice choice. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Your vocals are real quiet compared to the beat, put 'em way up to get a perfect mix. Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic? Try improving your recording quality if you can. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Rango

3 years ago

call up the cops cuz i got my glock up hitting with my bros yeah we spraying they block up call me a diamond professor i got the ice flow is so cold i dont need a name of price if a nigga was rich he wouldn't get a wife and im no gangster but a nigga know how to fight but umm cut the shit i know why yall here yall here to see me rap and cry some frozen teers but im gone now im no longer in my soul now i couldnt find my self now im alone now but a nigga keep the heat but a nigga still get cold feet but a nigga keep the streets cant wait for a feat. but a nigga was cold hearted now a nigga feel like a dead nigga in the departed if i wasnt yo life how would you feel would you feel i fight but i dont keep it real i would not lie but ima keep this feelinnnng i hope i dont die i stay yo life hoping you can be my wife i i i cant breath wating for your heart beat i can only live off of the air you breathe i could cut my neck down still touch the ground the love we found but i keep down a nigga scared to show his feelings but im here now and i hope yall aint like me cuz i wanna be one and only