Yo @giinx!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'Lara's '!
The beat is fire, nice choice.
Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up.
Awesome energy in your delivery, nicely done! Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire.
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Yo @giinx! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Lara's '! The beat is fire, nice choice. Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Awesome energy in your delivery, nicely done! Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
good work. solid story telling rhyme scheme and delivery. good music great message. keep it alive and keep working.
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥