RISING from the pit
IM RISING from the pit I'm about to take over this shit with this puny human body causing you disgrace i will have your head on a stick i will rise and you will fall everyone on their knees while my message ill transmit I'll dismiss you like the flu you pathetic excuse for a hero I'll show everyone that there is only darkness they will bow to me i will end your life painfully All thanks to a Broken soul the seal was broken now ill set my plan in motion your soul I'll mortify I'll send you flying like a fireball over your grave I'll stand tall your like titan about fall letting others go carrying the world on your shoulders I hope they remember you because in the end I always win Ying yang coming back like boomerang I'll burn it to dust and rebuild it to my image then ill reign supreme hell shall rise and heaven will fall no more heroes darkness remains gods no more freedom gone against all odds I'll bring a new age demon's in every universe I will stand tall beat the lights out of whoever stands in my way i will release the four horsemen of apocalypse bring chaos release the tortured souls living like a king I'm going to be the one and only I'll get the eyes of Satan and God I'm like thanos without the infinity stones breaking all your bones i will smash your head into a wall took you to death row im spiting lyrics like machine gun you heroes have nothing on me you attack it your deathday you bleed out as i slipway im on the airway
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IM RISING from the pit I'm about to take over this shit with this puny human body causing you disgrace i will have your head on a stick i will rise and you will fall everyone on their knees while my message ill transmit I'll dismiss you like the flu you pathetic excuse for a hero I'll show everyone that there is only darkness they will bow to me i will end your life painfully All thanks to a Broken soul the seal was broken now ill set my plan in motion your soul I'll mortify I'll send you flying like a fireball over your grave I'll stand tall your like titan about fall letting others go carrying the world on your shoulders I hope they remember you because in the end I always win Ying yang coming back like boomerang I'll burn it to dust and rebuild it to my image then ill reign supreme hell shall rise and heaven will fall no more heroes darkness remains gods no more freedom gone against all odds I'll bring a new age demon's in every universe I will stand tall beat the lights out of whoever stands in my way i will release the four horsemen of apocalypse bring chaos release the tortured souls living like a king I'm going to be the one and only I'll get the eyes of Satan and God I'm like thanos without the infinity stones breaking all your bones i will smash your head into a wall took you to death row im spiting lyrics like machine gun you heroes have nothing on me you attack it your deathday you bleed out as i slipway im on the airway
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Yo @grimreaper20! Waddup - let's take a look at 'RISING from the pit '! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Your vocals are real quiet compared to the beat, put 'em way up to get a perfect mix. Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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