Hi @sjayp!
Welcome to our feedback of 'Dont Fuck with Dolls '!
The beat is fire, nice choice.
Your voice is sounding a bit loud in the mix, you may wanna put it down a little. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent!
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hi @sjayp! Welcome to our feedback of 'Dont Fuck with Dolls '! The beat is fire, nice choice. Your voice is sounding a bit loud in the mix, you may wanna put it down a little. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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