my crime
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I've got rhyme out with the crime police on me i tell a different story every day comittin crimes robbing the bank doing my rhymes about my life yeah I say about my life yeah yeah I say to my wife help me get a knife then help out with my crime back when I was little it was funny I was wanting to be a cop when I grow up yeah that the end of my life yeah
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Hey @thegoldfish! Thanks for sharing 'my crime ' with us! Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. Good choice of beat! Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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