Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @bignasty.7173! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Jade (22:13:30)'! The lyrics are fire, nicely done! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! The beat is fire, nice choice. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

bignasty.7173

3 years ago

Damn i wanna die, broke my heart made me cry, said she loved me that was a lie, broke my heart and said goodbye, she said she found a better guy, tried to text her she didn’t reply, u got me lookin in the sky, I’m tryin to figure out why. why would u sacrifice my life, if u knew I thought u we’re going to be my wife, I feel like u just stab me with your knife and tried to end my life, like why