Hey @williamcormier.246!
Thanks for sharing 'breakdancing' with us!
Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, well done.
Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound.
The beat is dope and really works for this track. There's so much energy in your delivery, awesome!! Nice timing, you're perfectly on the beat. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there.
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
Wickedest young rapper I ever heard. Had to listen to the whole song!!!!!!π΅π΅π΅π΅π΅
Bars: 10/10
Delivery: 10/10
Impression: 10/10
Bars: Perfect π―
Delivery: Perfect π―
Impression: Perfect π―
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Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Hey @williamcormier.246! Thanks for sharing 'breakdancing' with us! Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, well done. Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. The beat is dope and really works for this track. There's so much energy in your delivery, awesome!! Nice timing, you're perfectly on the beat. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Wickedest young rapper I ever heard. Had to listen to the whole song!!!!!!π΅π΅π΅π΅π΅ Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Perfect π―
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
#TheSwypeReaper Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯