So fly ,Alonzo

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nigga so shy pull up in the building and u looking so fly but u ain't got no rap game old school all the same two checks clear my name feeling that pain making it rain riding my plane pull up as Cain this is my reignur insane chorus*2 imma rap classic come up with the tactics feeling so fanatic all ur bars are basic u crashed like an accident it was so tragic,so tragic he thought it was magic chorus call me terminater pull up with a tractor u know im rapper rapping like cassper imma let it rain check out my name in the hall of Fame u are so lame u just slain.

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Alonzo k

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5 years ago

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Bo Jangles

4 years ago

Please check out #rappingmagicverse2 and let me know what you think about it Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

👑 GODFLOW603 👑

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

☝🏾BIGSWYPER🦊

5 years ago

#SWYPERGANGLIT Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hi @alonzo161k! Welcome to our feedback of 'So fly ,Alonzo'! Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Good choice of beat! Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

ÝNG LùV3r B💕🇿🇦

5 years ago

doin good nigga Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

The 1 one

22 days ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

jflames.4996

6 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Dannie Harrington Cro⛲💚777

8 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥