Shooter (04:32)
I can rap about money I can rap about riches I can rap about the fact that those rythms tell you no story I'll continue a message from the ogs who paved the way give you a glimpse with lyrics that penetrate You talk about xanax drinking on the lean your ass will be dead or broke bye the age of thirty three Heed my advice you better count your blessing I have hitters young killas run up on you no second guessing Life can change in the blink of an eye 12 people got shot in the time it took to write this rythm In da city where only the strong survive do or die alpha omega when you come to the chi We see the world from a different perspective seeing the world out the eyes of a child with no hope or out the eyes of an addict addicted to dope we need to stop the perpetual circle of death before the government takes over and makes us live under their compliance
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I can rap about money I can rap about riches I can rap about the fact that those rythms tell you no story I'll continue a message from the ogs who paved the way give you a glimpse with lyrics that penetrate You talk about xanax drinking on the lean your ass will be dead or broke bye the age of thirty three Heed my advice you better count your blessing I have hitters young killas run up on you no second guessing Life can change in the blink of an eye 12 people got shot in the time it took to write this rythm In da city where only the strong survive do or die alpha omega when you come to the chi We see the world from a different perspective seeing the world out the eyes of a child with no hope or out the eyes of an addict addicted to dope we need to stop the perpetual circle of death before the government takes over and makes us live under their compliance
Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: On point ๐ฏ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Great ๐
Yo @80_94! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Shooter (04:32)'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. Your timing is pretty good, nicely done. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐
Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: On point ๐ฏ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐
Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
check me out Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Great ๐
Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐