This shit is an obsession feel like ima leave the weapon pull up on the fuckin block best believe we get the steppin leavin with my homies going through the neglection gonna battle the neglection gonna give a good reflection alaways keep it steppin never be holdin a weapon if I be steppin don't need all that protection unless they postin with their weapon shit will be my last obsession postin with a weapon gonna be my last obsession don't wanna lose my possession or be out there constantly wreckin just always be checkin hittin the bank cashin them checks in online baking im alaways checking
Yo @hay_kierann99!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'last obsession'!
Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track!
Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through.
The beat is dope and really works for this track. There's so much energy in your delivery, awesome!! Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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This shit is an obsession feel like ima leave the weapon pull up on the fuckin block best believe we get the steppin leavin with my homies going through the neglection gonna battle the neglection gonna give a good reflection alaways keep it steppin never be holdin a weapon if I be steppin don't need all that protection unless they postin with their weapon shit will be my last obsession postin with a weapon gonna be my last obsession don't wanna lose my possession or be out there constantly wreckin just always be checkin hittin the bank cashin them checks in online baking im alaways checking
Yo @hay_kierann99! Waddup - let's take a look at 'last obsession'! Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. The beat is dope and really works for this track. There's so much energy in your delivery, awesome!! Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team