This beat tough. Bro I'm telling u, once u start writing ur raps, u will so sooooo much better. U have ingredients but u gotta spit some written lyrics and spit with more passion. When I hear this free, I don't believe anything ur saying. U gotta spit like u mean it bro
You're doing really well. We just need to start giving it more passion here and get more confident when your flowing. Delivery ends up paying off but your subject matter and what you're writing about is fantastic it's awesome it just comes across a lot better with the emotionโ๏ธ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ
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This beat tough. Bro I'm telling u, once u start writing ur raps, u will so sooooo much better. U have ingredients but u gotta spit some written lyrics and spit with more passion. When I hear this free, I don't believe anything ur saying. U gotta spit like u mean it bro
You're doing really well. We just need to start giving it more passion here and get more confident when your flowing. Delivery ends up paying off but your subject matter and what you're writing about is fantastic it's awesome it just comes across a lot better with the emotionโ๏ธ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Come check my rhymes bro, nice track :) @SamG
getting better man more energy/emphasis would make you sick man
#LPallies for ever G respect, I see your flow has changed since our battle ๐๐๐ช๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฏ
yea westy, u growing more and more all the time. keep making us proud famโ๐ฏ
yo man your getting better and better everytime geez keep on going this is sick
dope
gdsb
AMAZING
yes broooo
Real nice
Lol good shit
thanks fam