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i heard these niggaz talking some one prepair the coffins cause they dumb ass a bitch if they think im not comin for em i got some hollow tips snug inside these exatended clips and ima let tou have em all l aint on no selfish shit find ya bitch in the hallway wit her throat slit face stuck on oh shit eye x,d like gold fish all this ice in my vains made me the clodest young nigga raised by soldiers leftin polls up i was told u do that crime you do that time dont let them crackers fold u up or lose ya mind
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i heard these niggaz talking some one prepair the coffins cause they dumb ass a bitch if they think im not comin for em i got some hollow tips snug inside these exatended clips and ima let tou have em all l aint on no selfish shit find ya bitch in the hallway wit her throat slit face stuck on oh shit eye x,d like gold fish all this ice in my vains made me the clodest young nigga raised by soldiers leftin polls up i was told u do that crime you do that time dont let them crackers fold u up or lose ya mind
Hey @damedrill5pl! Thanks for sharing 'on it' with us! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. Your vocals are a bit loud compared to the beat, put 'em down just a little for a perfect mix. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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