Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @dummizback! Welcome to our feedback of 'dummi'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. Practise improvising a little to improve your sound! Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

DUMMIZBACK

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.