Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @sawmfawn! Welcome to our feedback of 'some people '! The beat is fire, nice choice. Work on telling a story with your bars. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Sawm Fawn

3 years ago

The song is about ice and not having a to fuck up to date this