Hi @biancalawton!
Welcome to our feedback of 'I try'!
The beat is dope and really works for this track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track!
Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Try practising effects more to see how they work best. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent!
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: On point 🎯
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Thanks so much for your feedback Im new to this i love writing i guess its all about trial and error but hope i csn make something out of it
Hi @biancalawton! Welcome to our feedback of 'I try'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Try practising effects more to see how they work best. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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