Hey @tokku!
Thanks for sharing 'off the top unknown' with us!
The beat is fire, nice choice. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track!
Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics.
The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there.
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hey @tokku! Thanks for sharing 'off the top unknown' with us! The beat is fire, nice choice. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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