Hey @joannsides!
Thanks for sharing 'Sunday (23:05)' with us!
The beat is dope and really works for this track.
Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent!
This track really makes the listener feel something.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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so looking at the pic and then hearing the tracks like okay grandma 🤣
Hey @joannsides! Thanks for sharing 'Sunday (23:05)' with us! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! This track really makes the listener feel something. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team