Young Goth

3 years ago

@rapfame_ar_team is it the audio or the cussing

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @jjeagleson! Welcome to our feedback of 'lonely world'! The lyrics are fire, nicely done! Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Nice flow here - delivery is so important. The beat is fire, nice choice. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Young Goth

3 years ago

You think it's all fun and games until one of your homies passes away fuck now it's never gonna be the same shit if the world wasn't already lame now you're poppin pills just to feel okay but deep inside it feels like your to blame you would do anything to hide your shame because of how much you lied now your homie just died you can't take back how many times you homies mother has cried wish you could've at least tried don't know what to do with your life and now you're thinking your only option is suicide because there's nothing real inside