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Sakaratnak xa soach Nakaratmak kina banaune Aafnai soach MA xa dubnu, Aaf aisansar chalaunu. 2 din ko jindagi xa 1 din hijai biti sakyo. Tesaila ris Lai pariwartan gari Ekxin ramaunu. Aandharyo kotha Bata nikli Ekxin Teo sansar Lai her Sundar Teo prakriti Hawa huri ani baatas Lai vet Aakasha MA udi rahane Baadal haru xaan aanek Saatai raanxa aabo voli K garne vanney prashna lea
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Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Hi @tupsk! Welcome to our feedback of 'next one'! Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic? Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Good choice of beat! Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
otop Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ