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Sakaratnak xa soach Nakaratmak kina banaune Aafnai soach MA xa dubnu, Aaf aisansar chalaunu. 2 din ko jindagi xa 1 din hijai biti sakyo. Tesaila ris Lai pariwartan gari Ekxin ramaunu. Aandharyo kotha Bata nikli Ekxin Teo sansar Lai her Sundar Teo prakriti Hawa huri ani baatas Lai vet Aakasha MA udi rahane Baadal haru xaan aanek Saatai raanxa aabo voli K garne vanney prashna lea

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5 years ago

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Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

5 years ago

Hi @tupsk! Welcome to our feedback of 'next one'! Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic? Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Good choice of beat! Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Delivery: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

otop Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

22 days ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

3 months ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

9 months ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

10 months ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

4 years ago

Drip ๐Ÿ’ง

5 years ago

Bars: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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