Hey @uknotlondon!
Thanks for sharing 'heartbreak - uknotlondon' with us!
The beat is fire, nice choice.
Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat.
Nicely done, you can feel the emotion on this track. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
respect and thanks you for your comments, and instructions am learning as I go hope to get better.
Hey @uknotlondon! Thanks for sharing 'heartbreak - uknotlondon' with us! The beat is fire, nice choice. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. Nicely done, you can feel the emotion on this track. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
I like this one special to date!!
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Mastery on display, you're killin' it without mercy! 🔪 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥