Yo @fazeboysggbot!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'Doom (20:59)'!
The beat is dope and really works for this track. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track.
Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track!
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Yo @fazeboysggbot! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Doom (20:59)'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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I like I think it's even better than mine
I loved the end