broke with no girls

Name: broke with no girls
Description: listen to my rhyme you can hear I'm going in time when I'm broke listen this is no joke it's a thing that makes me feel sad i even feel bad don't have any money it's kinda funny but since I'm fifteen you may know I'm an teen sorry guys i guess i just need to rise even self I'm small i feel like I could calljust god for help sometimes i knelt before my bed thinking when I'm going to dead

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listen to my rhyme you can hear I'm going in time when I'm broke listen this is no joke it's a thing that makes me feel sad i even feel bad don't have any money it's kinda funny but since I'm fifteen you may know I'm an teen sorry guys i guess i just need to rise even self I'm small i feel like I could calljust god for help sometimes i knelt before my bed thinking when I'm going to dead

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Alex Ali

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5 years ago

See track description ↑

(Bₒₜₘ) ₛₕₒₒₜₐ

5 years ago

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Pan_Jae

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

☝🏾BIGSWYPER🦊

5 years ago

#KINGSWYPERBEENLIT Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

😈🐐SUPA 👿🐐🙉🙈🙊

5 years ago

#Gj14 Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hey @alexali.564, We're gonna review your track 'broke with no girls'. Let's get it! The recording quality on the vocals it great! Whatever your setup, keep it like that! Think about which words you emphasize and where they fall on the beat to give a good rhythm to the track. The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 The effects don't really compliment this track, try to find the right ones for the mood. It came out with a bit more metallic sound than necessary though. Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! 🤟 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Alex Ali

Author

5 years ago

thank you everyone

Shon Phenomenon

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Blueyedevil (L.L.)

5 years ago

🔥🔥🔥 slide through with the like #TDKAM Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

O.G. SIK

5 years ago