Yo @my_guy_king!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'Murder on my mind'!
The beat is dope and really works for this track.
Your vocals are really loud, could you put 'em down a good bit? Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential!
It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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MURDER ON MY MIND. like literally #Murder#blood#rappin#nocap
Please check out #porn2 and let me know what you think about it Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Dope track fam keeping them coming
Yo @my_guy_king! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Murder on my mind'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Your vocals are really loud, could you put 'em down a good bit? Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 6/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Nice 🌟
Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥