Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @darkshadows2143! Waddup - let's take a look at 'drowning'! The beat is fire, nice choice. Your vocals are real quiet, could you put 'em up? Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Nice timing, you're perfectly on the beat. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Dark shadows

3 years ago

I FOUND THE KEY IN MY TREE IT FELT LIKE A BREEZE I FELT LIKE I HAD TWENTY KEYS WEIGHING ME DOWN INTO THE OCEAN WHERE I WAS FOUND I ALMOST DROWN INTO THE UNDERGROUND I FELT LIKE I HAD NO WAY OUT