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I'm in da club

I'm in da club

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28 Jul 2021

produced by: jaylon January I'm in da club: yea uh yea uh let's go. I'm in da club with my brother got my Jay's on bans in my pocket and two women want to fuck wit us and they were sisters so we took the sisters home and they said they want to fuck and suck us all night until 2 in the morning and after we got done we took them back to the club. suddenly we see some niggas that we dont like they walk up so we got to pushing,yelling,fighting, screaming and cussing then when is time for us to go so we stopped and hopped in the vehicle before the laws showed up and beat us wit they're fuckin night sticks.

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well done

3 years ago

Remind me and you definitely went beast mode in the club I feel like you had really good hype and delivery I definitely get chemistry too so I feel you bro stop in

3 years ago

Hey @jaylon15! Thanks for sharing 'I'm in da club ' with us! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

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