Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @nftwax! Welcome to our feedback of 'new talk'! Good choice of beat! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. We suggest working on your improvisating a little to take your track to the next level. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Dogeiemon

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.