Hey @xxkingofmexx,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'cordell marshall - the race', here are our thoughts π₯
The beat is too loud here, it makes it hard to hear your vocals over it.
Strong bars on this, keep it up! π
Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π
We really like the idea of the track and you defo got some lit bars. Your flow is nearly there, you just fall off the beat a couple times in the track. To really improve this track maybe tone down the volume of the beat and the effects on your voice as they are quite overpowering!
You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! π€
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @xxkingofmexx, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'cordell marshall - the race', here are our thoughts π₯ The beat is too loud here, it makes it hard to hear your vocals over it. Strong bars on this, keep it up! π Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π We really like the idea of the track and you defo got some lit bars. Your flow is nearly there, you just fall off the beat a couple times in the track. To really improve this track maybe tone down the volume of the beat and the effects on your voice as they are quite overpowering! You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! π€ We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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