Hey @hippo420!
Thanks for sharing 'First rap w/ new account / hippos eating chicky nuggz ' with us!
The beat is dope and really works for this track.
Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Try improving your recording quality if you can.
Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hey @hippo420! Thanks for sharing 'First rap w/ new account / hippos eating chicky nuggz ' with us! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team