Journey
5am it’s not bright no light The caravans ready I’m saying good bye It feels like I’m gonna cry Driving away saying it’s happening today I’m tired I’m bored I’m looking at birds Driving 24/7 nearly there It really feels like forever I’m playing on my phone I sort of miss home That’s how I went on with my day I got to Scotland it was cool I saw a park I went to a beach I found some jelly fish But only 6 days there left I went to the beach I heard some tyres screech I made a stream from a lake to the sea It was really awesome 6 days later I said see ya later We drove off I was on my phone But I hit something and hit my funny bone Heard the stereo blasting I can’t stand it I’m bored I’m tired I don’t want to drive I got bruises 24/7 cruises I don’t like it I saw a bit of London It was fun den We went to England it was cool but heat waves and trash WiFi is all we get They said we will go to a circus But it was fake it was Lego land It was awesome it was fun I saw tiny building it was so real But at the end my legs gave up I was tired I was hungry We went to a castle Windsor and Leeds Wow they were awesome They were big they were old But it’s time to end
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5am it’s not bright no light The caravans ready I’m saying good bye It feels like I’m gonna cry Driving away saying it’s happening today I’m tired I’m bored I’m looking at birds Driving 24/7 nearly there It really feels like forever I’m playing on my phone I sort of miss home That’s how I went on with my day I got to Scotland it was cool I saw a park I went to a beach I found some jelly fish But only 6 days there left I went to the beach I heard some tyres screech I made a stream from a lake to the sea It was really awesome 6 days later I said see ya later We drove off I was on my phone But I hit something and hit my funny bone Heard the stereo blasting I can’t stand it I’m bored I’m tired I don’t want to drive I got bruises 24/7 cruises I don’t like it I saw a bit of London It was fun den We went to England it was cool but heat waves and trash WiFi is all we get They said we will go to a circus But it was fake it was Lego land It was awesome it was fun I saw tiny building it was so real But at the end my legs gave up I was tired I was hungry We went to a castle Windsor and Leeds Wow they were awesome They were big they were old But it’s time to end
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Hi @rainway! Welcome to our feedback of 'Journey '! Your vocals are really clear, that's amazing! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! The beat is fire, nice choice. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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