love @onlyonebaron
Love is all arounds it's what you make of it life before was a miriage I knew my life felt meaningly I wanted to give up buh I jaz held myself and kept going Looking at those days I was a shadow of myself I use to hate and sin and wake up in a mess on a new day my head hurts my heart bleeds my soul leaks yh was sick lost in pain yeah I use to hate n sin I was in distress I sing I was close to being mean then I prayed to God....I sinned I just asked him for one thing YOU You came into my life.... the miracle was so intense you whispered in my ear and I still hear those words inside my head God's know best....can't talk back can't disrespect he gave you to me and didn't give a fuck If I use to sin yh..... Babe you mean allot to me I wrote this song and poured my soul and heart into this beat I hope you listen and just memorize this song at ease I know you will cause I well I love you yh am so fucken glad rn am so fucken happy babe my life was a mess you came and fixed me up and showed me care your what pressed to be my best yh I love you in content I don't know where I would be if it were nad for ya love I swear I was lost buh m found we ain't giving up shit This a place we have come now let's see what Iv missed you captured my heart baptized in ya soul +1 is the code that's y Amma shout chorus part 3
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Love is all arounds it's what you make of it life before was a miriage I knew my life felt meaningly I wanted to give up buh I jaz held myself and kept going Looking at those days I was a shadow of myself I use to hate and sin and wake up in a mess on a new day my head hurts my heart bleeds my soul leaks yh was sick lost in pain yeah I use to hate n sin I was in distress I sing I was close to being mean then I prayed to God....I sinned I just asked him for one thing YOU You came into my life.... the miracle was so intense you whispered in my ear and I still hear those words inside my head God's know best....can't talk back can't disrespect he gave you to me and didn't give a fuck If I use to sin yh..... Babe you mean allot to me I wrote this song and poured my soul and heart into this beat I hope you listen and just memorize this song at ease I know you will cause I well I love you yh am so fucken glad rn am so fucken happy babe my life was a mess you came and fixed me up and showed me care your what pressed to be my best yh I love you in content I don't know where I would be if it were nad for ya love I swear I was lost buh m found we ain't giving up shit This a place we have come now let's see what Iv missed you captured my heart baptized in ya soul +1 is the code that's y Amma shout chorus part 3
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Hi @onlyonebaron! Welcome to our feedback of 'Love'! Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. The beat is fire, nice choice. The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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