What's up @oblax,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Life'! π₯
Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little!
Smooth delivery here, keep it up! πΆ You're perfectly on beat with this, awesome! π
We like how the beat sounds with your voice. πΌ
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. π€
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 5/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Good π Impression: Dope π₯
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What's up @oblax, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Life'! π₯ Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little! Smooth delivery here, keep it up! πΆ You're perfectly on beat with this, awesome! π We like how the beat sounds with your voice. πΌ With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. π€ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯