DOUBLE M

Real Pain Freestyle

DOUBLE M
Real Pain Freestyle

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22 Jul 2021

See I hope I make it out alive cah I've always wanted a chance to thrive Prove myself Cah i wanna show mum and my cuzzy I'm made for the big wealth Be made for them stacks enough to reach some shelves See I've always looked up to cuzzy cause he a visionary See I was in a dark place when I wanted my heart to be stationary Hundreds is what I've got Billions is my aim now See this about the pain now Just dont be tryna be pree my chain now To much family I've seen laid down Laid down one day imma be balling like harry kane my mind be fucked up I'm only tryna maintain only tryna keep sain them man be wetting people up like rain this place ain't for people like you and me dangerous Is what these streets are I've been left with nothing but scars nah nah nothing but scars See my heart left me at the tender age of 13 I be turning to god and be tryna do good deeds When everything went sideways while seeing my mum cry I hated the situation that were in so I can never lie. But I'm reach the billions like jus you wait and see I hope that I never turn the wrong way and make people bleed I'm growing up now I guess I've planted the seed Now I just gotta wait till I've grown the branches and new leafs Tryna get to billions I ain't taking less no looking at mum I can see that she is stressed. Gonna Making up so some people need to move away. I need to make it so I dont sit down and lay. That slacking shit is what i was on years. I was on my own balling out them tears. One day I'll get rid of them fears. And imma whipping in a farrari changing to them higher gears. But it didnt start like this no. I hated my peers. They were all ears and no eyes. Always waiting on my downfall so I cut if them ties nooo yh I had to cut of them ties Only up now my mind is only up now Finally start winning so there wont be no touch down Starting swimming though these waves so I know I cant drown now So high up in them clouds so now one can compete with me Finally started making sounds so the world can start hearing me

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3 years ago

thanks for the feedback

3 years ago

Hi @doublem_365! Welcome to our feedback of 'Real Pain Freestyle '! Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? The beat is fire, nice choice. Great energy, such chill vibes. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

3 years ago

See I hope I make it out alive cah I've always wanted a chance to thrive Prove myself Cah i wanna show mum and my cuzzy I'm made for the big wealth Be made for them stacks enough to reach some shelves See I've always looked up to cuzzy cause he a visionary See I was in a dark place when I wanted my heart to be stationary Hundreds is what I've got Billions is my aim now See this about the pain now Just dont be tryna be pree my chain now To much family I've seen laid down Laid down one day imma be balling like harry kane my mind be fucked up I'm only tryna maintain only tryna keep sain them man be wetting people up like rain this place ain't for people like you and me dangerous Is what these streets are I've been left with nothing but scars nah nah nothing but scars See my heart left me at the tender age of 13 I be turning to god and be tryna do good deeds When everything went sideways while seeing my mum cry I hated the situation that were in so I can never lie. But I'm reach the billions like jus you wait and see I hope that I never turn the wrong way and make people bleed I'm growing up now I guess I've planted the seed Now I just gotta wait till I've grown the branches and new leafs Tryna get to billions I ain't taking less no looking at mum I can see that she is stressed. Gonna Making up so some people need to move away. I need to make it so I dont sit down and lay. That slacking shit is what i was on years. I was on my own balling out them tears. One day I'll get rid of them fears. And imma whipping in a farrari changing to them higher gears. But it didnt start like this no. I hated my peers. They were all ears and no eyes. Always waiting on my downfall so I cut if them ties nooo yh I had to cut of them ties Only up now my mind is only up now Finally start winning so there wont be no touch down Starting swimming though these waves so I know I cant drown now So high up in them clouds so now one can compete with me Finally started making sounds so the world can start hearing me

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