Lil_carli

3 years ago

thx

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @lil_carli! Waddup - let's take a look at 'slow story '! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Your voice is real quiet in the mix, you should put it way up. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Lil_carli

3 years ago

listen closely lil carli dun did it again so look pulled up too his crib hop out da whip bust down da door told him give me da doh before I let dis glock blow he said no pulled da trigger slow ran out da door hop in da whip then I dipped next thing you know I see his Opps behind me so I let da 40 blow before I let it blow I said I was no troll just wanted to let you know