Hey @og1on1,
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Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! πΆ Nice flow on this! But it does get repetitive, try mix it up some more!
Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ
Work on the audio quality, the clarity of the lyrics isn't always the best, such as in the verses!
This time you just missed out on Featuring π, but here's what you can do to make it next time:
- Try and test out the distance between you and the micπ€ before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! β¨
- Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! βπ₯
- Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! π
- The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! π―
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Hey @og1on1, We appreciate you sharing ' Trap Jumping' with us! π₯ This track has so much energy π This has us hyped, "Jumping, jumping, jumping" π― You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. π Some seriously impressive rhyming in here, you know what you're doing for sure. Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! πΆ Nice flow on this! But it does get repetitive, try mix it up some more! Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ Work on the audio quality, the clarity of the lyrics isn't always the best, such as in the verses! This time you just missed out on Featuring π, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Try and test out the distance between you and the micπ€ before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! β¨ - Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! βπ₯ - Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! π - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! π― We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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