will it always be this way - by mctzimms
I really tried to give it my all on this one and wrote from the heart, I hope you guy's like it. I stress about alot I stress about what I have What I dont have I stress about what I got Ima have not So I drink alot Might as well smoke All I do is hope Sometimes I wish on the stars Take me away Send me away to mars Im just flesh and blood And my mistakes are large Sometimes I wonder How did I get these scars I might be small But inside my heart is large i feel so depressed Life is so complex Im lost inside A part of me has died I never feel alive Im less than My shoulders cold Yours looks tan I talk to my shadows My shadow understands My brain is damaged My heart needs a bandage I feel so stranded Last man standing I'm crash landing My soul feels lost But at what cost I keep my fingers crossed I keep on searching My stomach keeps turning Am I in hell burning Life is like a ocean Im sinking like an anchor The world gets darker Time gets stranger If lust is power Then love is danger Compassion is a curtain It opens both ways People are estranged everything fades One day I'll be ashes Or bones inside a coffin When my life is over Can I visit you often Or in time will my memory fade Tell me why Why I'm created this way Is it my face Tell me what has changed The world keeps turning I'm standing in place I've lost my direction I don't have brakes My goals are dashed I've lost the race My drive has driven You've driven me away Sometimes I wonder Will it always be this way yeah will it always be this way #mctzimms #sad #depression #sadsong #hiphop #ky #kentucky #mixtape #oldschool #boombap #emotional #love #death #rapfame #rapfamevideo
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