Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @dman.2046! Welcome to our feedback of 'Ay '! Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, nicely done. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Great energy, such chill vibes. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

dman.2046

3 years ago

Ay Rest In Peace pop rip von free Melly D rek is the fucking goat My bitch is so hot I know I smoke weed sike bitch I don’t I’m sitt in here writin bars Shawty I’m big yes I know But I don’t eat no protein bars Ay Ass fat jello light skin yellow Ay these my dawgs say hello Man this beat is hard I know Shawty came and suck me tho Ay Boi pass me that fucking drank Sike boi I don’t fucking drank Shawty sucking on my toes Sike bitch that is so oh gross Ay