ALONE
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In this life ..all I've got to do it win Cause this life I'm all alone And I've got to show the world I'm in my zone, these bitches be calling my phone, don't care I don't pick up the phone, made my name ...rose up to fame, don't care what they say...I'm already made, I'm soon going to get paid, then niggas be calling my name, Cause I'm alone alone alone alone alone aloooone ....2× in this life I've been thinking I don't need anyone to make me feel like I'm winning, all these broke niggas be telling me that I'm kidding,
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In this life ..all I've got to do it win Cause this life I'm all alone And I've got to show the world I'm in my zone, these bitches be calling my phone, don't care I don't pick up the phone, made my name ...rose up to fame, don't care what they say...I'm already made, I'm soon going to get paid, then niggas be calling my name, Cause I'm alone alone alone alone alone aloooone ....2× in this life I've been thinking I don't need anyone to make me feel like I'm winning, all these broke niggas be telling me that I'm kidding,
@AjGraniter true talk
@darktrips very true to an extent God's always around even when we don't think so he is
@rapfame_ar_team Thanks for the review
Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 7/10 Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: On point 🎯
Yo @darktrips! Waddup - let's take a look at 'ALONE'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out. This is super chill, a real nice vibe. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Nice work my brother liked my pinned track if you can I'll do the same 🙏🏾
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Thanks
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥