Yo @deerboxerentertainment!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'parmesan '!
Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track.
Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up.
We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. Good choice of beat! Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire.
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
😂😂🛌 Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Yo @deerboxerentertainment! Waddup - let's take a look at 'parmesan '! Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. Good choice of beat! Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥