Yo @mozzyboy!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'razor slit'!
Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that.
Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound.
The beat is dope and really works for this track. Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Yo @mozzyboy! Waddup - let's take a look at 'razor slit'! Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that. Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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