sever
member when I was a kid everything was different wasn't nobody trippin didn't even know about drip I just wanted a sip of a bottle of liquor but the cure just kept making me sicker put that down helped me pick up my focus now I'm putting all my demons on notice you're getting evicted cuz I have been lifted knew I was born gifted and born different I've been lifted I've been given nothing not a thing was gifted but I gotta follow my vision and I'm sorry you aint innit it's my life I live it and there's the door you gotta hit it it's a hard decision but I'm bound to make it it's a hard line but one of us has got to break it I can't take it I been fakin I can't shake it my hearts breaking you were supposed to be a man but instead you just a bitch how the hell you gonna play me like a damn snitch that's some damn shit so I'll dust it off and sever my ties might have to shoot you in your fuckin eye can't take another fuckin lie can't take another drunk night or a drunk fist fight having to fight your family it aint right but I been fighting all my life so I just continue to ride and just continue to vibe all you pussy bitches stressing gonna fuck up my high and gonna ruin my life these drugs will ruin my life but I been dying to fight and I been flying to high I been falling down no parachute just stuck in the sky tell me why tell me why tell me why I gotta sever my ties and look the devil in his eyes say I'm sorry you right but you aint taking what's mine Even if I never change or hit the fame I'm sanctified for life sanctified when I die never gave a fuck when I seen my nana cry it's a crocodile spin a lie a mile come and sit a while that just aint my style just a pack and mild then I'll pack and smile say I'll see you later in a little while it's a lie and I said it but I can't say I regret it I'm just sparing all your feelings cuz you can't fuckin accept it and that is why I left it I left it all behind it was time to fuckin lift the blinds look inside and see behind the curtain yeah man I was so blind but now I'm awake and I'm alive so fuck your life your friends and wife it's over
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Hi there @rebelsolo, Here's some feedback on your track 'sever', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that. You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. 🙌 You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. 👍 Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! 🌠 We love the meaning here, just putting those demons out on the beat, creating pure art! 🖼 This track would benefit 10 fold by an improvement in the audio quality! 🎤 There's some sick flows right here, but some of the bars are difficult to catch cause of this lack in audio quality This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! 👌 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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I got new battle please comment much respect either way fire lyrics till I die forever only honest votes much respect for giving me a chance to 👌 👍 #TmThatLyricalDumpin hope you enjoy 👌
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