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I download the app Just to see what I could do with it, I upload a beat Now I really found some use with it, Explored through my thoughts Now my bars made a ruler fit, Brighter than ever What I saw like a solar eclipse, Listen to the flow Never thought that I had it, Practice makes perfect Came here like magic, Cleaner than ever So far from a static, This should get me forward Instead of being in a tragic.

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Zane Jannelli

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5 years ago

Lil Joiner2.0

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hi @zanejannelli! Welcome to our feedback of 'static'! The beat is fire, nice choice. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Your timing is great, well done. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Rylo474

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Alex wayne

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 7/10 Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: On point 🎯

Cato Kirin Casper

2 days ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Mr.nolo (the endgameboss)

5 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥