Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @donavanrangel! Welcome to our feedback of 'DARKSIDE'! Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects. Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Donavan Rangel

3 years ago

Darkside My dark side is in me I can hear him breaking out the pain and screaming in the distance creates such an evil sound yeah i'm right here i’m like a creature I won’t stop I won’t fail I am here so don’t come near I’m a shadow there's a dark presence in the wind u can’t see me i’m in the night I have all the might trust me i know how to fight so i'm a darker spirit. Im fast i'm not the last I was born in the past my kind goes fast we will last for all eternity i'll pass i don’t know why I dash I talk about the passed im strong I will become the one that will move on. I am strong, I won’t be gone, I'm smart even though I have a small heart and I have a big part in life.  I am little. I am still growing. I will become I don’t know what is income. I will be the one now i'm done with the gun I am a son now I am done with. This song